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If the descent of colors is purposeful: just weeks ago we felt yellow jackets menace the thin skin The muscadine falls blue to the trail and sets off the hickory ...

Well, this isn't the best of poems but... I enjoyed it. =]

I know this needs a lot of help, whatever. The cold night air is like colonge slapped on my cheeks, the way your caustic comments slapped, stung and stayed - ...

Under these black lights in the atrium of the teenage heart, I whisper across the chestnut table - "Hey honey, this tastes like blood. Jesus Christ. Golgatha burns tonight." He ...

Nice ending. Simplistic, but beautiful. Here's another from that day; Awkward transition.

I'm not sure about the elements of poetry, but I know that it lacked a meaning...besides that of the circulatory system (which isn't all that moving) had no symbolism, imagery, ...

Blood on the agnostic soul, We whisper prayers and poetry Into a cup of coffee, Sipping them as they brew into Passion, lust and loving – I swirl it with ...

Prettier =]

Yeah, we discussed that. It was pure accident. The dandelion being the sun - a universal thing - the blood being the wound, corruption, the signal of death.

Yes, Firestarter. I stole it. He knows.

Okay, right, so I owe you. This time of year leaves rain gold and yellow down into the bowl below the road home from black gaunt tangled limbs of half-bared ...

I want it to rhyme in the second one. It'd be pretty, then. I like pretty things. Simple language. niccccccceeeee

*Blinks* No points for me, then.

Hey Brad. I don't like the pauses. Especially how you break the paragraph in between them... But I know you'd hardly care about my opinion. Nice symbolism, but the outsider, ...

1) Nice imagery. I love the tone - the words all fit a certain theme, a feeling. You produced this magnificently. 2) We are but sinners in the hands of ...